Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Ultimate Improv Slam

Sunday, June29,

Imapoettoo  -Vs- Budsilver !
Winner : Budsilver!

Thanks to all who came , read and voted! 
 For those of you who missed it- here are the writes!
 
 
Broken Chains

there's a broken doll
in the corner over there
toss'd with disdain
forgotten in a year or two
~
There's a broken plate
on the counter
by the sink
along with a familiar link
~
There's a broken chain
round my healing heart
I had to forget the future
return to the start
~
There's a broken soul
bleeding out and alone
like an abandon'd dog
with nowhere to call home

©Ima Poet Too:  ER Barker
 
 
 
  "Broken Chains"
 
  His pain stricken face still haunts me
  Bound to the ships wall by these chains
  Poor old man sold into his slavery
  Knowing that he would never be free
  His eyes spoke stories, his voice couldn't utter
  Of the whips he'd felt and lashes taken
  Sold by his family, alone and forsaken
  Scars where the lash tore his skin like butter
  Somehow in his pain, he still smiled at me
  Sharing his wisdom, he poured out his soul
  He told me he knew he was not in control
  The his father in heaven, would soon hear his plea
  I had no understanding, as if his prayer were in vain
  He spoke of a time, when he would walk by the sea
  These chains have been broken, they'll never hold me
  One day he'll wake up in paradise, forever free
 .
  ©BudSilver



 "Waterfalls in the sky"
 
   Another sleepless night, I can't seem to rest
   Faced with the choice of this impossible test
   Nothing seems to add up, at times I feel lost
   Knowing the price I've paid, immeasurable cost
   Dreams come too few, I have no answer why
   Washed by the waterfalls in my night sky
   Memories erased, replaced by another
   How people can turn their backs on their brother
   Lucid dreams come and I feel so alive
   Nightmares compete that force me to cry
   No solace, no peace, I retreat to that place
   Remembering that last time that I saw your face
   With one simple kiss, you unlocked this man
  Tormented and twisted, I don't understand
   I peered that night inside of your tears
   I saw you boundup and wounded, shrouded by fear
   Awake the next morning, you weren't by my side
   Like a piece of my dream had withered and died
   If this dream comes full circle with you by my side
   It will be worth all the anguish and tears that I've cried
   If everyou're lonely and you just don't know why
    Let's lay down next to waterfalls in the sky
  ©BudSilver:  
 
 
 
 Waterfalls in the Sky

 Waterfalls in the sky
 Cliffs of vapor
 Rise up above
 the raging storm river
 ~
 thunderous 
 white water
 racing to earthly destination
 ~
 Raining
 down through
 Waterfalls in the sky
 ~
 Driving flood waters
 before its inundating
 power

©Ima Poet Too:  ER Barker

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